This was my first attempt at erotica. It was for a man who later became my lover, my love. It's not very good, which is why it's here and not in the "stories" section. But I thought I'd share it, just the same.

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I woke up juicy and horny, having dreamt of you in those last hours before waking. I spread my legs, reached down between them and confirmed my suspicions: even in my sleep you get to me. Since I figured you'd be at work, I sent you a text message, "all juicy ... wanna taste?" The reply was swift, "yet, i be rihgt there." You're no better at texting than you are at typing. Luckily you have a gorgeous tongue.

"Not here, not now. Meet me at the Four Seasons downtown. There's a room in the name of Anita Shag. Be there at 5."

I left work after lunch and headed to Sacks where I bought two silk scarves and a pair of thigh high stockings. I bought some Bushmills, chocolate syrup and peanuts at Chuck's, and headed over to the hotel. After checking in, I made sure there was cold water for the Bushmills and took a shower. The shower door was clear and I could see myself in the mirror. Just thinking of what was about to happen got me even more excited, but I refused to hold the shower massage on my clit ... Wait. Wait, I told myself.

Once my hair was dry, I got the bag from Sacks. I wrapped one scarf around my back, tying it in a knot at my cleavage. I took the other and wrapped it around my hips, tying it at my pussy. I put on the stockings and my high heeled shoes with the ankle straps. I was almost ready. I dipped my finger inside me and tasted myself ... then again, this time putting my juices on my neck so you'd smell and taste me immediately.

I was almost out of time ... I fixed both of us a drink (mine had ice) and sat on the bed, waiting for you. I was dying of anticipation, but I didn't touch myself. Much. Before long, there was a knock at the door. I answered it with your drink in hand, and you immediately went to kiss my neck. I leaned my head back, offering myself to you. You licked my neck and started untying the scarf covering my tits. My nipples were already hard, and you squeezed my tits together so you could take both in your mouth at once. I was unbelievably horny by now, so I had you get undressed while I took off the scarf around my ass. I picked this hotel for its four poster bed, which I had you lay down on once you were naked. I leaned over you and kissed you deeply, sucking your tongue into my mouth ... just a hint of what was to come. I ran my nails from your chest, up your arms and into your palms, tickling them. Then I grabbed your right hand and wrapped one end of the scarf around your wrist, the other end around one of the posts. I did the same with the left. You had a devilish grin on your face, thinking you knew what was next.

I walked over to my bag and took out my vibrator - it's pink, with a shaft that rotates and a clit stimulator - and sat down on your chest, my legs bent and my feet in your armpits. I leaned back, feeling your hard cock against my back. You bent your legs so that I could prop myself up on your thighs. I slid the vibrator in easily and then took it out, rubbing my juices all over my clit. I offered it to you, and you licked it hungrily. That was enough, it was my turn, not yours. I put the vibrator back in and turned it on, and you began to speak. You told me how sexy I am, and how much you wanted your tongue to be where the vibrator was. I was so turned on that I came almost instantly. I tossed the vibrator away and got on my knees, sitting on your mouth, so you could taste my cum. I rode your mouth for a few minutes, and backed away from your face. I rubbed my pussy all the way down to your pelvic bone, where I found a nice spot to massage my clit while I sucked on your nipple, biting it just a bit until you jerked. Then I moved to the other nipple, licking and sucking it, making it hard. I sat up, took a sip of your drink, and kissed you, letting the whiskey flow into your mouth. Then I took a sip of my drink, making sure one of the ice cubes stayed in my mouth. With my left hand pinching your left nipple, I took your right nipple in my mouth again, this time flicking the ice cube all around until your nipple was like a rock. You moaned for me to fuck you, but it was too early. I started licking my way to your waist, and further to your thigh. I briefly leaned in over your cock and blew my hot breath on you, making it jump a bit. Then I licked your thighs and stood up, bending over so you had a fantastic view of my pussy. I took off my shoes, and one by one, slid my stockings down the length of my legs. I took first one, and then the other ankle and tied them to the bed with my stockings, and walked over to the bag from Chuck's. Out came the chocolate syrup. I put it on the bed between your legs. I crawled back on the bed and slowly, ever so slowly, worked my tongue from your knee to your balls, gently blowing hot air on them, too. Up further, I licked your lips. I sat on your cock, not letting you inside, but rubbing myself all over you. Then I let your cock enter me, just the head. I squeezed hard and you popped right out. Again I put just your head in, and rested there while I kissed you. I licked your eyelids, your cheek. And let you in just a little more. I finally sat on you, your cock filling me completely, but I didn't move. Instead, I began a pattern of squeezing you from inside. Squeeze, relax, squeeze, relax, squeeze and hold. After a few times repeating this, when you looked like you were about to come, I slid you out and grabbed the chocolate syrup. Again, I took a sip of your drink and offered it to you.

I opened the syrup and drizzled it over your cock and balls, getting so turned on as it mixed with my pussy juices. I started with your balls, licking, sucking and gently biting them as I lapped up the dark sweet mess. Then I went to work on your dick ... putting a finger firmly on your taint, I licked from the base to the head, never forgetting to rim the head and lick your slit. My hand began to slowly massage your balls and play with your ass. I got a good rhythm going and soon you were fucking my mouth, my tongue pressing against the underside with every thrust. I started moaning, humming as you built up to your orgasm. Faster and faster my mouth worked on your cock. I grabbed the base with my hand, pumping in time with my mouth, so I could concentrate on the head. Sucking, licking, moaning, humming, sucking, moaning, licking, humming, finger in your ass, until you finally came. I let your cum slide down your cock and climbed on top of you once more, sitting again on your softening shaft while I kissed you. One more time, I took a sip of your drink and offered it to you.

And since I know you don't like sweets, I took out the peanuts so you got your savory snack. I untied your feet and your wrists and curled up next to you. You rounded yourself against me, hugged me tight and kissed my neck. I woke up to your tongue parting my lips and sucking on my clit ...

 

I am now officially sat at work, with a huge hardon, and cannot leave my desk until that puppy subsides. Fucking hot Piggit, Fucking hot - well done!

 

You shouldn't be here while you're at work! But thank you. Thank you very much.

 

OK spank me !

 

smack
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OK Now that's really not helping calm my erection down!

 

That was marvelous, sweetie! It made me fervently wish I was there! You shouldn't be so shy about your writing. All it needed was more length.

 

Stop complaining, or I'll go get the strap-on.

 

I keep getting told that unfortunately not about my stories.:-D

Only kidding it's usually, Gee you won't fit that monster in...

Only dreaming...

Piggit, I agree with everything Kimi said. Why don't you write part 2, I am sure it will be well received.

Oh, except about the strap on, don't need that.

 

I really enjoyed your story, Piggit, it's very hot...Now we are all waiting for the next part...I liked the way you ended it, you made it an easy transition into your next section...Thanks for sharing it with us...:-D

 

Not very good? Who are you kidding piggit? That was great..and it was your first? wow...you really should do another one

 

It was just another day as usual. I was sitting in a meeting when my cell phone started to vibrate. I pulled out my phone and flipped it open and saw the text message you sent saying "all juicy ... wanna taste?" Which I quickly replied "yet, i be rihgt there." As the meeting was ending you send me another text saying "Not here, not now. Meet me at the Four Seasons downtown. There's a room in the name of Anita Shag. Be there at 5."

As I’m leaving the meeting I think to myself “why would she put the room in the name of Anita Shag”? Hummmm. Then it dawns on me Anita Shag…I need a shag. I think to myself “I’ll give her a shag alright, while rubbing the hardness that is between my legs, she is going to get the inevitable Kool_madness Dick Down”. Not paying any attention, one of the secretaries says, with a wicked smile and a wink “you’re holding on to a lot there buddy”. She’s a cute blonde that’s been with the company quite awhile. So I start flirting with her, thinking about you and how we’re going to pleasure ourselves.

After work I drove to the store and pick up a can whip cream and a bag of cinnamon flavor Jolly Ranchers then head to the Four Seasons. As I walk into the Four Seasons I put the can of whip cream in one of my overcoat pockets and the bag Jolly Ranchers in the other. As soon as I get on the elevator a voluptuous redhead enters and I asked “can you push 7 please”. She smiles and does so. She looks like she is meeting someone also. I look down at her small ankles then her shapely calves and up to her smooth thick thighs and then “BAM” her round juicy ass. She was getting off just as soon as she got on. We exchange pleasant smiles and the elevator doors close.

As I walk down the hall I loosen my tie with a semi hard cock thinking about the redhead with the nice round ass. I knock on the door and you open it holding a drink and wearing two beautiful scarfs: one covering your luscious tits with your tantalizing nipples sticking out about a ½ in. and the other covering your well trimmed bush. I come in and close the door and start kissing and licking you on the neck. Smelling and tasting your essence, all the while removing the scarf that’s covering your tits. I push the two twin mounds together and start licking and sucking the hard dark nipples that make your tits look perfect.

You make me stop and tell me to get undressed. I take off my overcoat and then my suit jacket. Then as I’m taking off my tie you walk over and ripped my shirt open and run your hands up and down my torso grabbing and squeezing my pecs digging in with your nails. You start kissing me deeply then pinching my nipples. I can now feel the heat of your passion. I finish getting undressed and you slide your hand down my abs to my hard cock and balls where you give them a gentle squeeze. You grab my cock and lead me to the bed. You pushed me down onto the bed and told me not to do anything. There was a change in you. You were in control, the dominant one. Usually I’m the dominant one but now I’m the passive lover being tied to the bed posts and I like it.

What you were doing to me was blowing my mind. And that thing you were doing with your pussy muscles almost sent me over the edge, not to mention when you pulled out the chocolate syrup. After making me cum so hard you fed me peanuts so the salty taste would balance with the sweetness of you love juice, which flooded my mouth when you came earlier. Then we spooned each other and took a quick nap.

I awoke from our nap and looked at you while you were still asleep. I arose from the bed and went into the bathroom. I jumped in the shower to wash off the rest of the chocolate syrup residue that had now gotten quite sticky. I got out of the shower and without even drying off walk over to the chair where my overcoat was and pulled out the can of whip cream and the bag of cinnamon Jolly Ranchers. I open the bag and popped one in my mouth.

I walked over to the foot of the bed and stood there and watched how beautiful you looked lying there with your legs slightly apart and one arm over your head against the headboard and the other arm lying across your midriff. Your hair was covering half your face. I stood there and admired your beauty. You looked so sexy at that moment that my cock started to swell. Thinking to myself “how did I get so lucky”. I slowly ran my hand down your pedicured toes and feet. I notice how the nail polish matched the color on your delicate hands. You are always a one for detail. While caressing your feet and ankles I gingerly suck on your pretty toes, letting my tongue glide in between each well polished one. When I did this you open your legs some more and let out a little sigh but you were still sleep. I started planting kisses all over your ankles and licking up the sides of you calves. You started to lightly moan. Then I pushed your legs slightly apart some more. I now was planting kisses along your tender thighs and running my tongue closer to your honey pot. While sleeping your breathing changed and your moans were becoming more frequent. Your aroma started to flood my nostrils the closer I got to your slit, your lips slightly glistening. I spread your legs completely apart. I inhale deeply and begin my dissent with my tongue like a dive bomber. I plant a kiss on the moisture of your lips and let my tongue slide between them. You start panting and moaning now. I run my tongue up and down the inside of your lips. Then I come up and pull the hood back revealing your love button and quickly bury it in my mouth. Sucking and nibbling it. I look up at you and now you are wide awake moaning in pleasure, begging me “Pleazzz don’t stop baby”. Taking the cinnamon Jolly Rancher between my teeth and rubbing it on your clit and then in between your swollen lips again and again and again. I continue by writing on your clit with my tongue - This pussy heretofore belongs to Kool_madness - over and over and over again. Then rising up on your right elbow and arching your back and placing your left hand on the back of my head and pulling me into you, your body tighting up. You screamed so loud, that I thought the people in the lobby could hear, I’mmmmmmm Cu Cu Cu Cuuuuummmmmm iiiingggggg and flooded my mouth the most wonderful sweet nectar.

 

I emerged from between your legs to see that you have that most glazed over eyes look ever. I smile licking my lips with your love juice running down my chin and onto my chest and say “ You ready for round two” cause now you’re about to get “The Treatment” . Now the dominant side of me is back. I climb over you and place my cock between your tits. You push your tits together and allow me to fuck them. Every time I push forward you stick your tongue out to lick the tip of my cock. Then I rise up on my knees and you on your elbows and I slide my cock in your mouth. AHHHHHH this feels good. You grab my ass and pull me into you. I can feel my cock in your throat. I slowly fuck your mouth and throat. I always love the way you deep throat me. I feel the buildup in my sack so I stop because I’m not ready to cum yet. I climb off you and go to the foot of the bed. Grabbing you by your tender thighs I pull you to the foot of the bed. I put your legs over my shoulders, tap your clit with my cock a couple of times and then place it at your opening and slowly push in. I feel your tightness engulf my cock. The heat of your slippery sugar walls surrounds my hard and stiff member. Now I’m buried completely in you. With your legs over my shoulders and my hands tightly gripping your thighs I start slow, with short powerful thrusts. Coming out a little more and going in a little farther. I keep this up for about five min. then faster… then harder over and over. Every time I pull back, you moan louder and louder and I pull you into me so much so, that you have to grab to two posts at the foot of the bed to keep from falling off. I feel myself ready to explode so I stop and pull you up to me. With your legs and arm firmly wrapped around me, I kiss you deeply and passionately. I feel your tongue deep in my mouth as our lips caress. I lay you back on the bed, you look at me with those beautiful eyes of yours and say “How do you want me know baby” with a sinister look and smile I say “Head down and ass up bitch”. You say with a smile and a girlish voice “Yes big daddy” and proceed to assume the position, you say “come give to me big poppa”. You know I love it when you call me big poppa. Then you grab your ass with one hand and open yourself up to me. I love this position so I start by bending down and licking your slit and sucking whatever juice is still in there. Licking it back and forth, then I lick that little area that is between your slit and asshole. I hear you say “that’s it baby right there”. But I can’t stop right there cause your puckered rosebud is beckoning me, So I slide my tongue around the outside of your asshole then I flick my tongue across it which starts to drive you crazy. The more I lick your tight little asshole the more you groan. Now I start tongue fucking your ass and you’re moaning uncontrollably. Now it’s time, so I stop licking your ass and place my cock ay the entrance of your cunt and slam it in, causing you to scream with pleasure. I pull out to where just the head of my cock is in you then slam it back in causing you to scream again. Now I grab your hips with both hands and do it again, over and over and over again. Every time I plunge in I feel your pussy muscles tighten around my cock. It makes me fuck you harder and harder. I’m giving you the hardest power stokes I got. I’m banging you so hard that my balls are smacking the hell out of your clit. Sweat is pouring off both of us. You’re screaming with pleasure. Then I feel your body stiffen a little and your pussy clutches my cock with maximum tightness and you let out this deep animalistic sound that come from your diaphragm and move up through your lungs and into your throat and then your right leg starts to shake and your pussy feels like a silk gloved hand squeezing the hardness of my pole as I continuously plow into you with reckless abandon, then your whole body starts to shake and I feel my nuts fill and tighten. My left hand has found the back of your head and I pull your hair with my knuckles placed firmly against your scalp. The fingers of my right hand are now imbedded in the flesh of your hips as I slam into you for all it’s worth. The wick on my dynamite stick has been lit and the countdown has begun. There’s no turning back now. The sound is now leaving your throat and entering your mouth, piercing my ear cannel… what a lovely sound. Here it cums, Mt. St Madness is about to blow. The Damn is about to burst. Wooossshhhh my hose releases the jet like fluids over and over and over again that put out the fire that is deep within you and we cum together. We both collapse sweaty, wet and satisfied in a heap in the middle of the bed totally exhausted, trying to catch our breath. Once our breathing returned to normal it dawned on me that I did use the whip cream………………….”Yet”

 

Can I be next, KM, that was very, very hot???? *not_secure_link*mysmiley.net/imgs/smile/rolleye/rolleye0018.gif Got to love a man with good self control in bed...

 

Wow.

Quite a goodie there, KM. ::fans self::

RP ... by all means ... the next chapter is on you! I think my well pounded pussy needs a little time under the bathtub faucet.

 

I've heard people say that
Too much of anything is not good for you, baby
Oh no
But I don't know about that...

My darling, I can't get enough of your love babe
Girl, I don't know, I don't know why
Can't get enough of your love babe
Oh, some things I can't get used to
No matter how I try
Just like the more you give, the more I want
And baby, that's no lie
Oh no, babe...

 

You two make a good writing pair, I waiting for your next chapter, Piggit...Keep up the good work you two....Great story>>>>>>>()!!!

 

WAIT!! You're not going to add? Please do!
(I'm on painkillers right now and I won't do KM's bit justice.)

 

You don't have to do it today, and do you share your pain killers????...Someday soon we should start a thread where everyone takes a turn to write a story...Would be fun...

 

hahaha Well, my mom gave me this one ... I don't know what effect it will have. If I post something with nothing but jjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjj, you'll know it's working!