VN HTML Carmilla's Offer [v0.2] [Carmilla's Coven]

[LobsterWithKrabs]

Nice job with the art, you can tell it is AI but it is a lot better than most of the stuff you see churned out.

 

[whiteblue55]

Really promising so far. Hope to see more transformation like making MC's tits bigger.

 

[Ralpvolvos]

it is a good read, some continuity error in some scene but no big deal.

will check this one out again when there are more chapter.

more transformation like making MC's tits bigger.

really hope it wont go that route where it become massive tits. the present tits size already perfect imo.

 

[PGU]

Thanks for the feedback.Now that I see it,yeah it does get a bit annoying especially in text boxes that are more text-heavy.Will keep in mind.

Proceeds to not keep it in mind lmao... But yeah i agree, no space punctuations are very annoying. I always wondered what makes some people do it.

 

[AlliebuttDK]

A cool feature to have, would be the ability to rename Maya. While being able to name the protagonist of a game yourself is not a necessity, it's certainly a feature most people appreciate whenever it's available to pick.

 

[randomgamer986]

Really promising.
1. the writing is actually nice to read. You have the character interactions and speech down. It really feels like the characters are speaking to one another.
2. The AI arts seems to be made with care. You really took the time to make all the art consistent. I am usually anti AI, but I can see the effort here.

What this needs now is that you continue building on it!

Wish you the best Carmilla's Offer .

 

[Raine_Maxwell]

Her laughing face kills me. HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

 

[Troqu]

This is a fantastic start. I do hope now that the introduction is out of the way we'll get a bit more freedom. Currently it's basically a kinetic novel (the only "choices" are all required to move on) and while KN are fine, I prefer some agency.

 

[Sorter]

I am curious. I know it's not stated in the categories, but is there incest content planned?

 

[shadowburnXX]

im really excited to see everything turns out over all ^^

 

[Carmilla's Offer]

This is a fantastic start. I do hope now that the introduction is out of the way we'll get a bit more freedom. Currently it's basically a kinetic novel (the only "choices" are all required to move on) and while KN are fine, I prefer some agency.

Thank you, yes I'm planning for the following versions to be more open, with some minor choices and choosing with subplots you want to do first, that kind of thing.

 

[dany ouellet]

mmh in the contract part the sentence : I swear to help and protect my sisters. can be misinterpreted and risky..i wish maya asked more about it since it could mean she might be forced to put heself in danger in many situation that are outside her capacity... and feel kinda twisted

 

[Idontsniffpanties]

Wake me when there is at least 10+ hours of gameplay

 

[randomgamer986]

Wake me when there is at least 10+ hours of gameplay

wake me up. wake me up inside!