Two years ago, I wrote the dev about it:
"Just re entered after awhile. What is happening with the dialogue? You have a cast of white suburban characters, many of whom are presumably approaching middle age, all sounding like they're either from the hood or 'tryna' be.
Take the MC for example - in 5 minutes of gameplay, I found all the following:
"My sister's tryna be an artist"
"I'm tryna buy something special"
"I'm down to buy it"
"Price ain't an issue..."
"I know you got Ron"
"Ain't leaving till you tell me..."
"I ain't like that"
He doesn't sound like he's in the mafia. He sounds like he's in the Crips. And it's infecting other characters, too.
Please, take a fresh look at your writing. You have a solid game, but the dialogue needs to be more appropriate to the characters."
The dev wrote back "We will consider it. Thanks for report."
The drop off in writing quality made me stop sponsoring it on Patreon. I hope they've fixed it, because it suddenly became unplayable.