bamachine

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How did you even manage to go this far? According to the rest of your review, you should've bailed out right after Lily was confirmed to be comatose for an undefined amount of time.
The first srtaw was Allison coming back to the park to get Lily, telling about the house being broken into. Lily's "accident" nearly made me quit right then but I saw it as a possible way for the mc and Allison to possibly reconnect but it really had my hackles raised. As soon as I saw the "Wyatt" scene the following morning, that was the last straw.

I don't like to give up too early but those three things in rapid succession was enough for me to bail.

Not trying to discourage anyone else, as I said, it seems like a great game, for those that like well written drama with a good side of comedy. That just isn't what I am looking for, I just wish more of the devs that make my type of game(everything above minus the drama), were as good at writing. I have found a few but too far in between, imo.
 

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Just a little mini-review. While I love the art, the writing, especially the humor and the characters, I just got to the mc thinking they saw Wyatt, who I assume is behind the break in at Allison's and maybe even Lily's accident. I know these are real life issues but that is not what I am looking for in these games. I go to them to escape the drama of real life, which is why I gravitate towards happy go lucky harem or single romance games, with only comedic drama.

So even though I have to give kudos to the dev(s) for the style, characters and writing, this will be a nope for me. I also loved Acting Lessons until it tore me heart out. I am not taking that kind of chance again. Gimme the escapism of simple single romance or drama free harem games.

I will say one more thing before I exit, Amen to this...

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Agree. I've said it a few times but the plot is really all over the place and becoming another 'intertwinnied' mess. Daughter needs urgent care, mega expensive...need money now...I know...I'll go illegal underground road racing where I could end up dead in a ditch. Just work on the fucking battery project....but then the MC is dumb as fucking bricks, academia aside...

Virtually every VN these days has to have some dumb ass crime/mafia/mob element...it's a damn joke. The story would not suffer at all without it. But hey, the dev wanted to make Fast & Furious 74 with more romance elements. It is what it is....so...there you go. You either accept the absurdity of the plot or you don't.

I will say one more thing before I exit...
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Agree. I've said it a few times but the plot is really all over the place and becoming another 'intertwinnied' mess. Daughter needs urgent care, mega expensive...need money now...I know...I'll go illegal underground road racing where I could end up dead in a ditch. Just work on the fucking battery project....but then the MC is dumb as fucking bricks, academia aside...

Virtually every VN these days has to have some dumb ass crime/mafia/mob element...it's a damn joke. The story would not suffer at all without it. But hey, the dev wanted to make Fast & Furious 74 with more romance elements. It is what it is....so...there you go. You either accept the absurdity of the plot or you don't.

I will say one more thing before I exit...
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With all due respect....half of this site would drool over and fuck a garbage can if it had a red wig draped over it :WeSmart: :ROFLMAO: :devilish:
Is it a garbage can with a red wig and a pair of red eyed painted on it?
:love: :ROFLMAO:

EDIT: green eyes, not red; dumbass! :FacePalm:
 
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mruggeri2

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Just work on the fucking battery project....but then the MC is dumb as fucking bricks, academia aside...
Did you even pay attention to the story? The underground races was the only option he had left because the Doctor needed the money to be able to fund the clinic and start Lilly's treatment. He couldn't wait and work on his battery because he didn't even got any grant for it yet, so he wouldn't even be able to make money off it fast enough. Making a battery project like his is not something that is done in a day or two and even after it is completed, you need time to get investors, buyers, contracts, etc... It's not so simple.

If they waited for him to finish his project and then find a buyer for it, Lily's would most likely had died by then.

It's okay to criticize the AVN but make sure to pay properly attention to the story if you are going to do so.
 

Dessolos

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Did you even pay attention to the story? The underground races was the only option he had left because the Doctor needed the money to be able to fund the clinic and start Lilly's treatment. He couldn't wait and work on his battery because he didn't even got any grant for it yet, so he wouldn't even be able to make money off it fast enough. Making a battery project like his is not something that is done in a day or two and even after it is completed, you need time to get investors, buyers, contracts, etc... It's not so simple.

If they waited for him to finish his project and then find a buyer for it, Lily's would most likely had died by then.

It's okay to criticize the AVN but make sure to pay properly attention to the story if you are going to do so.
still doesn't mean it's a good option to do or even worth the risk even if he needed the money now. It only works because it's the theme of the game
 

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still doesn't mean it's a good option to do or even worth the risk even if he needed the money now. It only works because it's the theme of the game
Ever saw an AVN main character with brain? MC's can be well educated, even geniuses, but they all aren't smart in terms of life decisions. That's the whole point in this genre.
 

Dessolos

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Ever saw an AVN main character with brain? MC's can be well educated, even geniuses, but they all aren't smart in terms of life decisions. That's the whole point in this genre.
of course I was just simply stating it just wasn't a good option is all. If we had smart MC's alot of these games wouldn't be as fun or funny.
 
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xXwankerXx

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>Game is called "Race of life"
>Game's story is about a man joining races to save a life.

Literally unplayable. 0/10.
Oh, shit. So, teachers don't usually fuck their attractive students and have lil illegal street racing side hustles to make money off IRL, cuz their shitty-paying jobs are barely enough to pay the bills and put food on the table ??:eek: Fuck !! I knew something about this sounded too F&F to be true.:cry::ROFLMAO::LOL::KEK:

Ever saw an AVN main character with brain? MC's can be well educated, even geniuses, but they all aren't smart in terms of life decisions. That's the whole point in this genre.
Basically, some MCs (just the elite 1/2% of them ofc, we all know the rest are just a bunch of virgin, horny morons and sleep molesters or dumb cucks:giggle:) are depicted as real ppl with real qualities and flaws making good and bad life choices (like we all do) and having to live with the consequences or rewards of those choices. Sounds pretty good and interesting to me.

I too am interested in the trash can with red wig, possible blue or green eyes (shoot the moon and do both with heterochromia), and freckles.

That's still a better LI than Veronica.
*sighs* Ain't you ppl (you Allison fans, not just you specifically) interested in talking about something else, literally anything else, except trolling a pixelated woman who can't defend herself and who's obviously a milking cow the devs cleverly exploit for the $$$ at this point ??

I get that most of it it's done in a chill manner and for the lolz, but after reading the probably 1000th comment making fun of her, it's not even fun anymore, in some cases, it's getting borderline annoying hinting at some potential real resentments toward real women.:whistle::coffee:

Mods should give you some kinda reward for doing this for so long, when y'all could basically debate anything else except this, or go back to doing it after a new update is released and you get more ammo against her. Where's ALL the hate and trolling for dickheads like Ian and Wyatt or Cooper, with all the dumb shit he says, has done and keeps doing ??

Man's a great friend, but a very dumb character, even for porn game standards.

With all due respect....half of this site would drool over and fuck a garbage can if it had a red wig draped over it :WeSmart: :ROFLMAO: :devilish:
Well, very smart ppl wouldn't be making a stupid amount of money off sex dolls and OF if what you said wasn't true, but I personally would prefer a blonde wig to the red one.:sneaky:(y)
 

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Oh, shit. So, teachers don't usually fuck their attractive students and have lil illegal street racing side hustles to make money off IRL, cuz their shitty-paying jobs are barely enough to pay the bills and put food on the table ??:eek: Fuck !! I knew something about this sounded too F&F to be true.:cry::ROFLMAO::LOL::KEK:



Basically, some MCs (just the elite 1/2% of them ofc, we all know the rest are just a bunch of virgin, horny morons and sleep molesters or dumb cucks:giggle:) are depicted as real ppl with real qualities and flaws making good and bad life choices (like we all do) and having to live with the consequences or rewards of those choices. Sounds pretty good and interesting to me.



*sighs* Ain't you ppl (you Allison fans, not just you specifically) interested in talking about something else, literally anything else, except trolling a pixelated woman who can't defend herself and who's obviously a milking cow the devs cleverly exploit for the $$$ at this point ??

I get that most of it it's done in a chill manner and for the lolz, but after reading the probably 1000th comment making fun of her, it's not even fun anymore, in some cases, it's getting borderline annoying hinting at some potential real resentments toward real women.:whistle::coffee:

Mods should give you some kinda reward for doing this for so long, when y'all could basically debate anything else except this, or go back to doing it after a new update is released and you get more ammo against her. Where's ALL the hate and trolling for dickheads like Ian and Wyatt or Cooper, with all the dumb shit he says, has done and keeps doing ??

Man's a great friend, but a very dumb character, even for porn game standards.



Well, very smart ppl wouldn't be making a stupid amount of money off sex dolls and OF if what you said wasn't true, but I personally would prefer a blonde wig to the red one.:sneaky:(y)
I couldn't say it better, basically you said almost everything I think about playing fictional AVNs or any other game, that is why I rarely and really avoid put myself into LI/waifu wars or debate if something in a fictional story are realistic or not. Both ways can be well delivered, a bit more realistic or much less specially in sci-fi and fantasy if does not cross my own line of what is totally absurd, everyone has a different line so its subjective, like humor is for each person.

Yep the "hate" some people put into pixelated chars is borderline obsessive at this point, I have like everybody else more and less favorite chars but to reach the point of hate a fictional char, I have better things to worry about, games are about relaxing and fun.
 
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